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Young Yule

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JESUS THIS IS THE SOURCE OF WHERE IT ALL STARTED!!!! :iconshockplz:
Just Yule again... I love my baby so much... to bad I hurt him a lot in the story. 0u0 
I'm such bad person that. :iconlaughingplz:

Okay I'm good. :la: 
Yule belongs to :icongoldenjay097:
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Again, well done. Must say this character is real cute~
as for pointers there are mostly 3 I have for you: first one is her right eye is abit to far out, which you'll notice when you compare the harmony of the eyes to the outline of her face(aka: cheeks and chin). If you had shuffled it slight inwards the proportions of the face would harmonize better.
Second, the line of her throut makes the head look oddly placed to the body. Keep the arc but instead of arching it straight down try angle it inwards abit. This will give her a shy slightly hunched pose. The third pointer goes hand in hand with the second and is more like a tip or opinion(take it however you like), but the fluff of the hem of her jacket's(sorry if I guessed wrong) neckline, If it was me I'd try and make it even more fluffier. It'll take the lookers focus away from the head-body position and compliment the cute face and make it look more petite:)